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[Shattered Heaven Ep. 0]

Pretty good voice acting, I think you oversimplified the animations though.
Try to improve that, quality over quantity I say.
You should work more on the quality of the SFX too.
The music sounds great!

Good luck with your project!

AdamTilford responds:

I'm only simplifying the animation so I can put this out while working on the animated movie which is already of a much higher quality product. It's more of a time saver. But as I go I'm sure the quality will improve as I get used to it. The audio, except for the exposition was mixed like 2 years ago, just recently decided to redo the web series. But yeah, thankfully my SFX library has been updated a lot in the mean time.

Thank you and I hope when the series properly starts with Episode 1 that a lot of the improvements from this one will be apparent.